Monday, June 11, 2007

more poems

ok, i made a poem, it doesn't make any sense, and really sucks (and sure isn't as good as tori's!), but i'm still proud of myself anyways! lol! Ok, here it is...

Why am i so naive?
Why am i so confused?
When the truth is plain to see,
at least for everyone but me.

Why am i so left out,
i've gone into a pout,
Wont somebody tell me,
What this fuss is all about?

I think i have made up my mind,
I know what I should do,
I'll walk right up to them,
and ask them what's the deal.

They told me what was happening,
I feel i should've known,
That never trust a rumor,
No matter what you feel.

6 comments:

softball.is.my.life said...

wow marissa thats good...

Rootless_Tori said...

thats really good!!!!!!!! it doesnt suck!!!

seriously, yours poem is wayyyy better than mine.

lol

Tori

Michael said...
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Marissa said...

Thanks biby! and yes michael biby cletus is some random person. And thank you guys! lol!

Andie Kelly said...

wow marissa AWESOME POEM!!!

Marissa said...

HI! AND THANK YOU EVEYONE! LOL!