Monday, August 6, 2007

my song

I tried writing a song for the first time, and i think it turned out ok for my first try, but i dont know what other people will think! lol! I'm just worried that it sounds too much like other songs!

You're the littlest of the family,
Always in a mess,
You really dont know what's good for you,
And i have to confess,

I'll never know what its like to be you,
I'll never know, I'll never know,

You always struck me as someone who was happy,
Always there, Always doing what you're told,
But someone who holds it in for too long,
Will soon explode,
I couldn't say exactly what you felt,
I'll never know, I'll never know,
All i can say is i'll be there for you,
I'll take your hand when it gets cold,
Did you honestly think she would be there for you?
Even after she lied and treated you like shit?

I'll never know what it's like to be you,
I'll never know, I'll never know,

You're the littlest of the family,
Always in a mess,
You really dont know what's good for you,
I'll never know what it's like,
I'll never know

3 comments:

softball.is.my.life said...

wow ur a serious natural at that kind of stuff marissa i know i'm just saying that but u really are lol

softball.is.my.life said...

i meant i know i say that lol!!

Marissa said...

lol! well thank you alison! you're very sweet!